a nature haiku

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Wind whistles softly

Sunlight caresses my skin

Leaves rustle in shade


the first haiku that i did not throw away. tell me how it is.

Photo by WARREN BLAKE from Pexels

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  1. Mahi-Writes3 February 2021 at 21:53

    Liked it Ki. No, loved it, and the description makes it seem to be really difficult to write. 5-7-5? I was horrified. But good job

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    1. key4 February 2021 at 08:43

      Thank you, Mahi! :) It becomes easier with practice. And mine is just a beginner poem. You can find many wonderful haikus online!

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  2. Raashi 9 February 2021 at 11:18

    you know kishu, i tried writing a haiku....and after an hour, on the page which i wrote, it had only one line. hats off to you! i just found it soooo difficult to make it...yours was like 'buttery smooth' Bravo!!

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    1. key9 February 2021 at 12:57

      aww Raashi :( don't worry, it'll happen with practice. my advice would be to break a line into syllables and figuring out the best way to fit it into the line. Thank you so much! <33

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    2. Raashi 9 February 2021 at 13:30

      thanks a lot i'll surely work on it

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